for a demo it was ok, but...
you really arent supposed to submit demos so i graded it is a whole
#1 the art is good
#2 no sound, when you do put some in try to find approriate & and small loops (so the whole thing isnt a music video)
#3 make the words slightly larger, may mean increasing movie size
#4 i appreciate that you like maxx and are trying to make your own but as such you need to put a little of your self in it, not simply copy a style